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这两个句子有语法错误么TodayI‘d like to talk about the importance of stu

这两个句子有语法错误么
TodayI‘d like to talk about the importance of study in a library when we can read online.
Read online just likeeat fast food.
这是一篇Is library still useful at a time when we can read online的演讲稿中的两句话,自己写的,想知道有没有问题
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竹风淡茗_ 幼苗

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第一句的when错了,应该可以改成where或which?
第二句的Read改为Reading.

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可是打在文档里之后第二个句子它没说有错啊

举报 竹风淡茗_

第二个句子里Read是动词,只能做谓语而不能直接做主语,但这样一来就缺主语,所以要化为动名词Reading作主语。 百度不一定准啦~~~呼呼~~~

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嗯嗯,可是第一句。。。是演讲的题目我原来写的是TodayI‘d like to talk about the importance of study in a library at a time when we can read online.看问题补充,有没有错啊。。。

举报 竹风淡茗_

有点混乱呢。。。 如果是演讲,不妨分两个句子写,比长句更容易让人听懂。

韵玥 幼苗

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句子重心太后 at the trend of reading online more and more populor , i'd like to talk about the importance of studying in the library somehow . of 后 跟studying
第二句 缺主谓 reading online is just like eating fastfood

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anan_520 幼苗

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第一句话后面的when we can read online有些意义不明
这里前面TodayI‘d like to talk about the importance of study in a library已经是完整意义的句子了
如果想要表达 在读书馆读书比网上阅读要重要的话,可以说:
Today, I'd like to talk about the importan...

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